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A very striking cover, good title and
intriguing pitches, that has to be a good start. Certainly gets you
enough credit to deal with the polarizing effect of that short
passage of dialogue with which the book opens. Despite dire
warnings against it from many sources, I see no problem at all with
opening with dialogue. It's relevant and effective.
I love the premise contained in your
pitches, the background established in the reader's mind - a former
marine from a wealthy family setting out on his own, travelling the
country. Great idea, rich in dramatic potential - Vince is no mere
drifter, but a character the reader can relate too.
You have excellent judgment of pace,
missing nothing essential but keeping the story flowing along and
toy are clearly an accomplished writer. Romance needs strong, viable
characters that readers can relate to and you've certainly done that
here. A well constructed novel, I'm pleased to back this.
MUMMY'S BOY
JARED CONWAY
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I love this - reads like a movie - so
polished and well written threaded with humor and romance I think
this is one I'd buy based on the pitch and it would not disappoint
after I read the first three chapters - I will come back to this
later but meanwhile BACKED 100%
Liz
The Cheech Room
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Excellent pace and style. Very well
written and enjoyed. Backed with pleasure.
warm wishes
Hatts
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You have all the attributes already
mentioned...the pacing is great --yet not so fast that any relevance
is lost, yet fast enough to propel the reader forward. I have
already formed a warm liking for Vincent. which is totally
necessary...I either have to love or hate the main character -
feelings of that gray area in between can be reserved for less
important characters...yet I have the distinct feeling that if you
do introduce anyone at all, they will be relevant. and not be
mentioned just to window dress. I have backed this book with
great pleasure.
Suzannah Burke
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